In the 2015 i am most grateful of sports, milk and academic learning.
The reason that i am grateful of the sports is that i took place of cross-country and that i also took part in rugby league. The other reason that i am grateful of is academic learning because i can get better and better at my learning and now we have netbooks so it don’t get hard anymore. The last reason that i am grateful of is milk because it really helps my brain and that is make my brain smart and strong.
In 2016 i am going to try and achieve most of my writing, my reading and my maths. If there is anything
fun or another rugby league game i will be in it and take part in cross-country again and also i will be in the new basketball team .
Check your work carefully Tamati, You've put the wrong heading on this piece of writing. You also need to use labels. eg: Grateful, goals, 2015.
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